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At the same time I am publishing this, I am writing Maria's story. One of the freedoms of writing novellas is that I can include stuff that I couldn't include in the novel. in the novel, I would need to streamline the plot and leave it on Nantucket. Maria, as victim, would be pushed aside so that Coffin could meet Lollipop and Rick could get more involved. But, without the ceiling of 75,000 words and the need to move at speed, Maria gets her due.

Now, this scene is relatively new to the story, but I like the idea of Rosie kicking the shit out of Henry. She deserves it. and he does too, even if he was correct to hold out the information. Billy and Jack create firestorms of rage. They did back in the Inn own Brant Point, and they do it now. Because they are idiots, they feel insulated from it.

Either way, it is interesting for me to have these two sections paired. If it was in a novel, think I would have to go chapter Billy and chapter Maria. this way, as novellas, both stories cohere.

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